Plans of Rani Future Life
Rani is my classmate. She is younger than me. She has a lot of plan of her Future life. The plans are she wants to get a job to be came teacher in Senior High School after she gradueted, she wants to get married in 25 years old, she wants to have a house which has a lake in it's back yard. Rani has a lot of plans which has i can reflection my self from her.
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-Topic Sentence : she
-Controling Idea : a lot of plan of her future life
A u really sure with ur TS? A TS consists of topic and CI. Ur CI should be in one sentence with the TS. For each supporting detail, u have to put more information. For instance, "she wants to get a job to be came teacher in Senior High School after she graduated". U need to give further info on this, so the readers will have same perceptions about her 1st plan. Be aware of ur spelling, SV agreement, and conjunction. Please use different type of sentences too. Em waiting 4 ur better writing in the future:-)
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